Two haiku
7July 7, 2018 by petrujviljoen
sun streaming –
I’m blinded to all else
but the light
sunset gifted –
cloud shapes the tail of a whale
dwarfing the mountain
July 7, 2018 by petrujviljoen
sun streaming –
I’m blinded to all else
but the light
sunset gifted –
cloud shapes the tail of a whale
dwarfing the mountain
Very fine haiku!
Thank you!
You are welcome!
You accomplish in Haiku that which I strive for but often fail at attaining – you bring up images that are way beyond the words. A whale does indeed possess beauty that diminishes a mountain because of the life it holds. I have seen that cloud and been blinded by that light you speak of. Well done!
Oh fantastic! Much pleased people like it. I wondered if the images will come across.
Nature can be so dramatic and powerful sometimes. Great haiku. 🙂
It can! It can! I’m in awe almost every day. Thanks Suzanne. High praise from someone like you.