Two haiku


July 7, 2018 by petrujviljoen

sun streaming –
I’m blinded to all else
but the light

sunset gifted –
cloud shapes the tail of a whale
dwarfing the mountain

7 thoughts on “Two haiku

  1. Charley says:

    Very fine haiku!

  2. Alexander De says:

    You accomplish in Haiku that which I strive for but often fail at attaining – you bring up images that are way beyond the words. A whale does indeed possess beauty that diminishes a mountain because of the life it holds. I have seen that cloud and been blinded by that light you speak of. Well done!

  3. Suzanne says:

    Nature can be so dramatic and powerful sometimes. Great haiku. 🙂

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