January 14, 2021 by petrujviljoen
hollow –
the weightof it
Category: haiku, poetry | Tags: depression, haiku, micropoetry
I love this. It says so much in so few words.
Thanks.
I love minimalist haiku that say a lot. Like this one.
Hi! Thanks!
Smiling that haiku can be minimised!
You’d be surprised how much unnecessary detail people who count and use every syllable can pack in.
I enjoy being free of the counting!
It’s not my thing either.
Indeed. (K)
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented: #Haiku Happenings #9: Petru J. Viljoen’s latest haiku!
Thanks Frank!
My pleasure, Petru! 🙂
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I love this. It says so much in so few words.
Thanks.
I love minimalist haiku that say a lot. Like this one.
Hi! Thanks!
Smiling that haiku can be minimised!
You’d be surprised how much unnecessary detail people who count and use every syllable can pack in.
I enjoy being free of the counting!
It’s not my thing either.
Indeed. (K)
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #9: Petru J. Viljoen’s latest haiku!
Thanks Frank!
My pleasure, Petru! 🙂