Power
4September 12, 2019 by petrujviljoen
Edited 13/9/19
it’s off my back
the sod styled himself a man
in the eyes of his wife!
this version posted 12 Sept. 2019
it’s at my cost
the wimp became
a man in the eyes of his wife!
Copyright Petru J Viljoen
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I think often men rely on others visions of themselves.
Which we do not have to believe… nor regret.
It’s hard work not to regret Jules. But one should try.
Oh dear, this does not sound good. As an experience. As a poem, I think you’ve told a whole story in three lines, full of overtones. Now that is something very good, I think.
Thanks Claudia.