CDHK – Meditation

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August 27, 2018 by petrujviljoen

between slate grey and
dusk-drenched green earth an event
soft white yellow gold

Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai asks for a masterpiece. The above is one of them. (cough-cough)

2 thoughts on “CDHK – Meditation

  1. Long time no see PetrujViljoen and with a wonderful haiku … Is this one a masterpiece? I like the choice of words, they are well chosen, but somewhat mysterious. I think this haiku uses something like the “riddle”-technique, because it gives me several scenes to which it can point. Yes I think you have created a masterpiece.

    • Hi Kristjaan. Yes, it’s been a while. I was hoping people would arrive at the idea of a sunset without me actually stating that it is. The dusk-drenched was to be the clue as to what I was trying to describe.

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