horizon line


February 27, 2018 by petrujviljoen

IMG_4903 (500x258)
clouds racked
above a pause in pale blue
time – horizon line


Linked to Dverse Poets

25 thoughts on “horizon line

  1. Just Barry says:

    The haiku accompanies the picture perfectly.

  2. Hope! Beautiful x

  3. Chances… future opportunities perhaps…

  4. It’s as if you’re looking to the future by looking to the sky, letting that which is on the time-line of the horizon define the present moment.

  5. kim881 says:

    I love the ‘pause in pale blue time’ – and the horizon line makes me think it’s decision time or some kind of realisation.


  6. A pearl you’ve written.

  7. For me, an excellent feeling of anticipation. Lovely poem!

  8. Waltermarks says:

    It describes the photo well. With the sun racked so low on the horizon, that’s a great angle

  9. Beverly Crawford says:

    Beautiful haiku!

  10. Blue M. says:

    I love that the word “racked” makes me think of a pool table with clouds for balls.

  11. Grace says:

    A lot of meaning in that “pause”….

  12. A beautiful photo — could be foreboding with the cloud bank, but hopeful with the sun on the horizon. I love the mixture of feelings it portrays.

  13. A moment to be still…to ponder…what dreams may come.

  14. Love those ‘racked’ clouds. Just a pause though, the blue. We don’t have long before we sink beneath the horizon.

  15. Frank Hubeny says:

    I liked the “pause” in blue and the horizon as a time line.

  16. The significance of a pause… a transition coming.

  17. Vivian Zems says:

    Perhaps a sign of a new beginning. ..

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

Available on Amazon

Available at Amazon.com

As the World Burns

Available at https://www.amazon.co.uk/As-World-Burns-Writers-Artists/dp/1951724046


Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material or any part of this material without express and written permission from myself is strictly prohibited.

%d bloggers like this: