horizon line


February 27, 2018 by petrujviljoen

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clouds racked
above a pause in pale blue
time – horizon line


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25 thoughts on “horizon line

  1. Just Barry says:

    The haiku accompanies the picture perfectly.

  2. Chances… future opportunities perhaps…

  3. It’s as if you’re looking to the future by looking to the sky, letting that which is on the time-line of the horizon define the present moment.

  4. kim881 says:

    I love the ‘pause in pale blue time’ – and the horizon line makes me think it’s decision time or some kind of realisation.


  5. A pearl you’ve written.

  6. For me, an excellent feeling of anticipation. Lovely poem!

  7. Waltermarks says:

    It describes the photo well. With the sun racked so low on the horizon, that’s a great angle

  8. Beverly Crawford says:

    Beautiful haiku!

  9. Blue M. says:

    I love that the word “racked” makes me think of a pool table with clouds for balls.

  10. Grace says:

    A lot of meaning in that “pause”….

  11. A beautiful photo — could be foreboding with the cloud bank, but hopeful with the sun on the horizon. I love the mixture of feelings it portrays.

  12. A moment to be still…to ponder…what dreams may come.

  13. Love those ‘racked’ clouds. Just a pause though, the blue. We don’t have long before we sink beneath the horizon.

  14. Frank Hubeny says:

    I liked the “pause” in blue and the horizon as a time line.

  15. The significance of a pause… a transition coming.

  16. Vivian Zems says:

    Perhaps a sign of a new beginning. ..

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