nuanced
11January 31, 2018 by petrujviljoen
the sky, light-shadowed
raven wings the firmanent
streaming nuances
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I love the last line. What an image! Fantastic.
Thanks!
That’s a good one. I like the idea of ‘streaming nuances’.
Thanks Suzanne.
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #9: Petru’s latest haiku for my current #Haikai challenge!
Ooooh!
🙂
The cloud look like ravens….
Their wings creating caverns of comfort…or chasms of chaos.
I’m sorry ravens carry such negative connotations. They’re astonishing birds actually – so caverns of comfort it is! 🙂
I think most natural things have that flip coin of good and that other misunderstood side. It is fun to investigate the different interpretations.