Arid – Frank J Tassone’s haikai challenge

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December 4, 2017 by petrujviljoen

cool, distilled water
– parched –
took a bite from a cloud

………
Linked to Frank J Tassone’s Haikai challenge

24 thoughts on “Arid – Frank J Tassone’s haikai challenge

  1. bethanyk says:

    You are brilliant

  2. julespaige says:

    This reminds me of a recent drive through mountains where the clouds looked like caps on the pines. I can imagine small animals not having to descend to the ground having enough to drink from the air … lovely.

    I book marked Frank J T’s site, is that a weekly prompt on Sunday?

  3. Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #2: Petruj’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!

  4. I’m looking out at the low grey cloud and thinking—I’d have to be really desperate to take a bite out of that! I bet your clouds are lovely and white and fluffy. Very effective haiku!

  5. Charley says:

    “took a bite from a cloud” Now THAT is arid! A worth haiku!

  6. I can taste that cool drink. Beautiful.

  7. jillys2016 says:

    Took me by suprise! LOVE, LOVE this!

  8. I love the last line! It’s so vivid and creative.

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