Edited – micro-poetry


November 9, 2017 by petrujviljoen

Yesterday I linked to Thotpurge’s month of micro-poetry and subsequently edited three of the four and added one.

 That sound
– awareness –
wind and the waterfall

of the wine jar
bruised consciousness

mountain drawing
close a cloak of mist
– auspicious!

dancing in my path
– observance
Baboon dropping
– light?
beetle wings!


One thought on “Edited – micro-poetry

  1. These are great. Love the wine and butterfly one.

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