Edited – micro-poetry
1November 9, 2017 by petrujviljoen
Yesterday I linked to Thotpurge’s month of micro-poetry and subsequently edited three of the four and added one.
That sound
– awareness –
wind and the waterfall
bottom
of the wine jar
bruised consciousness
mountain drawing
close a cloak of mist
– auspicious!
butterfly
dancing in my path
– observance
…..
Baboon dropping
– light?
beetle wings!
These are great. Love the wine and butterfly one.