Micro Poetry

27

November 8, 2017 by petrujviljoen

that sound
awareness – wind
in the bowl of the waterfall

bottom
of the wine jar
bruised consciousness

mountain – drawing
close a cloak of mist
– lucky!

a butterfly
dancing in my path
I wait for the end

…..

Taking up Thotpurge’s invitation to join in micro-poetry. I couldn’t do 13 – my lucky number – today. Hope there is more to come.

27 thoughts on “Micro Poetry

  1. I like how this is a Snapchat of something of your life thank you for sharing and check out my poetry and share 🙂 https://wp.me/p9t3QW-4o

  2. julespaige says:

    I have been ‘in’ each verse.
    The pleasant memories bring warmth on this chilly morning.
    Woke to 28 F – I have not been out yet. But I will brave the cold for a short time even if just to walk around the block.

  3. Alys says:

    These are all so beautiful!

  4. jazzytower says:

    That last one is so sad. A good write.

  5. gillena says:

    Luv the dance of the butterfly best of the lot

    Much💖love

  6. jillys2016 says:

    Love the opening lines! That sound / awareness / wind

  7. “bottom
    of the wine jar
    bruised consciousness”…

    A great one! 🙂

  8. Sumana Roy says:

    “bottom
    of the wine jar
    bruised consciousness”…O My! Fantastic!

  9. thotpurge says:

    These are so good Petru.. the second one I especially like and the fourth that starts with reminding me of chaos theory leading to a better end. Thanks so much for sharing.

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