July 8, 2017 by petrujviljoen
Raven q(r)uark, crassing, voicing,
mate circling a similar air.
Independent, minded, capable
of linguistic displacement, weighted
with significant information –
it was present at inception.
I don’t have rules as to where this should go by whoever takes this up next.
Posted as part of July Challenge hosted by the brave Jilly over at https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/07/02/july-challenge/
We write a first half to be completed by another intrepid poet. Come and play!
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We are doing a wrap-up & feedback on the July Challenge in Collaborative Poetry. I would welcome any feedback you care to offer. So glad you joined in! Jilly
Hi. Before you read this, just know that I meant no disrespect. Someone advised me to go with the sounds of the poem… but I’m just a tad crazy. You know that if you’ve read my writing. So… um, it is…. https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/07/09/song-nature-over-nurture-anytime/
I don’t get ‘disrespect’! See my comment to your post. 🙂
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I like this. I drew a raven in my journal this morning. I think he flew into my dreams. I’ll check out the link you mention. Did you know I am now hosting a haiku and related forms challenge now too – here’s the link if you are interested https://ontheroadprompts.wordpress.com/
Going there right now!
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