February 5, 2016 by petrujviljoen

horizon cloud mounted copy

Linked to Bastet’s A Month of Haiga. Please follow the link and read other’s haiga or to link up.

I invite critical constructive criticism please – can’t claim cognisance of a course unclassed otherwise.


15 thoughts on “Haiga

  1. Suzanne says:

    It looks interesting but unfortunately I cannot read the script on my computer. I probably could if I was using the tablet and could magnify it. 🙂

  2. julespaige says:

    Yes I can see how the clouds and their moisture attempt to wash away that which might seem unnatural… and yet humans are a part of nature.

    I have not quite figured out the technicalities of hagia – I have plenty of photos and verse is not the issue. Putting the two together is. (I’m an older tech challenged lady!)

    My only note would to be having the font or print a tad larger to make it easier to read.
    It must have been amazing when the sun did break through!

  3. Maybe we need that horizon to see what’s tainted..,

  4. Bastet says:

    Wow what a photo … interesting the use of “laved” – one wonders what is being washed … and that sets the stage — nicely done. Glad you could participate again too 🙂

  5. I like your haiga. It is modern in that it addresses current issues with the environment but it also has the wonderment of haiku.

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