Carpe Diem – haiku
9January 27, 2014 by petrujviljoen
Carpe Diem Special #74, Alexey Andreyev’s fifth ”morning awakening”- haiku challenge
The one written by Alexey Andreyev:
morning awakening:
among window curtains’ flowers
a blade of gray sky
My take on the idea:
curtains left undrawn
revealed a sleepless night
relieved, first light
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Being sleepless and jet lagged in California right now… What a sentiment
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Shock to the system, the flight, the weather different, no wonder. Escaping the snow?
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Just work I’m afraid…
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Oh well. 🙂
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I read this just after a night where I tossed and turned for a good portion of it…so I can sure understand this one!
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Had them myself so therefore … thanks for reading.
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I love this haiku inspired on the one by Alexey. Very nice to see you here frequently.
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Thank you! I’m trying to pursue an image and not just tell a story. Not sure I achieved it. Thanks for this forum to put in some practice.
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I am glad that you like Carpe Diem.
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