Tan Renga – Flight of the Eagle

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January 25, 2014 by petrujviljoen

A first attempt at this art form.

Carpe Diem

flight of the eagle
stepping into the world of dreams –
a silent cry

lifts despondent traveller

airborne, insight deepens

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9 thoughts on “Tan Renga – Flight of the Eagle

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    With the horrible conditions on most airlines these days, being airborne makes me despondent. I’m happiest when I reach my destination! 😉

    Tan Renga Shadows

  2. Wonderful… really great to see you here

  3. Welcome at Carpe Diem Petra … I like the way how you have completed the Tan Renga which was started by me. By the way I am your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

    • Kristjaan, I’ve had Carpe Diem bookmarked for a while but haven’t had the courage to join. Yesterday, I just closed my eyes and jumped in. I think I was supposed to have indicated within the text your name to your haiku and which bit was mine. I did tag your name though. I’ll be more clear with the next one. Thanks for hosting this. It is a wonderful way to exercise a newfound skill and get the feedback. It’s difficult working in a vacuum.

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